7 comments on “My Cool Lovely Vampire part 1

  1. cma mw ngasi saran ja,thor…
    mending klo nulis dialog pke petik dua ja jgn petik satu. cz kdg g keliatan tandax wktu lgi bca.
    trus bis tanda petik dikasi spasi biar g bingung bcax.
    hehehe, maaf klo yg da yg g brkenan *aoa dech*

    overall bagus kq crtax,,lanjuut thooor (^^)b

  2. cma mw ngasi saran ja,thor…
    mending klo nulis dialog pke petik dua ja jgn petik satu. cz kdg g keliatan tandax wktu lgi bca.
    trus bis tanda petik dikasi spasi biar g bingung bcax.
    hehehe, maaf klo yg da yg g brkenan *apa dech*

    overall bagus kq crtax,,lanjuut thooor (^^)b

  3. waww….
    sru nich.., ki seop pas lagi jd vampire wkwkwk…
    gax nyangka kiseop vampire beneran…
    ditnggu part slanjutnya thor annyeong..^^

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